I feel like looking through this, I'm seeing a basic theme of just the unseen life of Audrey Hepburn, but I feel like you should move one section. That section would be her royal followers. All the stuff included is great, but I feel that if you…
1. You did a good job making a 'useless' connection between Audrey and Snow White. And you did a good job at gathering materials to tell the story in your own way and explain why you think there are similarities.
2. Because you used 2 people for…
